1: Toretto (1250) ☗3☗8☗82017-02-09 20:21

move5-was better B77 or S78
move7-better is take the pawn in 86 this line is like this(7.Px86 8.Rx86 9.Bx77 10.Rx89+ 11.P*87 and in your next move,you takes his Rook)
move17- better is G58(if your oponent drop silver in 79 attacking your rook, the defense is R69)
move21-Rx69,it's continue with +R78 and you answer with 68 capturing the dragon in next move
move25-you can take one gold, having one more piece to defense and run with your rook.

well, i see the critical moves i think, you should watch hidetchi videos, and learn some tesuji! sorry for my poor english! is it, continue playing and you go better in shogi!