1: LilyLionmane (1818) ☗11☗8☗22022-07-12 02:36

move 6 if you are intending to play double static rook then it can make more sense to play either 42s and 22s and play into a bishop exchange opening. closing the bishops is not wrong to do but moving a silver can be preferred.

move 11 if intending gangi it can be also possible to play a slightly different shape. whats played is fine but there is also a way of playing with 46p-47s instead of 56p-57s. i dont feel like one is better than the other but its also a shape to consider and to be aware of.

move 30 capturing this pawn by way of the bishop instead of the pawn is probably more accurate.

move 36 its important to be careful with the order of moves. here it is worth considering playing 34p immediately and not reacting to the dangling pawn on 22. if 21p+ 35p 11t xb it is a silver for the two pieces- so still a good trade for sente maybe but sente is not immediately breaking through.

move 44 31b seems possible but the position is very nice looking for sente after 33g xn 24r 22p maybe.

move 49 i dont think it is right to block the bishop at this point in the game. the fight has already started- so spending time on the castle here is probably not the best. there is a slight lead- so slowing down the game may be a good choice- but i believe that leaving the bishop open is important- especially when it is aiming directly at the king.

move 52 i dont like placing a gold here- gotes way forward required that gote make some kind of counterattack and having pieces in hand is important for that. 

move 55 the rook should not be placed here. if you are worried about 37p+ xn 36p then you can play 26r instead of 27r. not only is 26r attacking the pawn- it is better placed and allows your knight to advance safely if 37p+ is played.

move 63 just loses a knight. i dont understand the idea here. if the idea is to place the rook on the sleeve file then it belongs on 26 in the first place. 36r could be followed by 37n creating a very strong shape with the knight under the rook. here the knight sacrifice is unaccomplishing at best.

move 67 loses a whole bishop. if xg xb xs there is no gold drop worth playing so i believe it is an ok position for gote.

move 68 it was important to have the courage to simply capture the bishop.

move 90 it is illegal but that doesnt matter really since other options were met with tsume.